When I first started this piece, I didn't really have a direction. All I knew is I wanted to have multiple short clips of voices and combine them into a super memory. After having people record their voices and listening to their sound clips over and over I finally figured out what I wanted to do. I thought it was really interesting when I asked people to record something into the microphone (saying whatever they wanted), they chose to talk about some negative memory they had. I compiled all the negativity into a negative super memory. I played some blues guitar in the background to help set the move and keep the story together. Also, I used different volumes for the voices so they don't all sound like they were recorded in the same place. I decided to make this piece short (a little over a minute) because I didn't want it to drag on and wanted to get straight to the point. Overall, I think my project was successful.
Ryan
The use of the original guitar playing helps keep the audience attentive. The use of the increase in volumes helped me engage in the piece even more. Some of the voices are muffled which made me think that the guitar is the main aspect of the piece.
Kyle
I thought the use of different medias (video games, songs, etc.) really helped this piece. It sounds distractions that are getting in your life everyday and that is what is going through your mind.
Anthony
The first person narrative of this piece helped drive the story and keep it together. I enjoyed the opening and closing of doors, as this helped me fully understand what was going on.
Kara
Overall, this piece was pretty intense. The were short and abrupt stops and really fast paced at some points. The harsh breathing helps add to this. The use of multiples styles of voice (even though it was only one) helped add to this piece.
Between You and Me by Patryk Rebisz is a very well-told story through the use of imagery. The use of consecutive images helps drive the story forward and keeps the viewer attentive. Since this story heavily relies on the use of images, each and every frame (image) is essential. Even though there was no dialogue throughout the entire piece, it was easy to grasp the different personalities of all the characters.